In some schools and universities, girls tend to choose art subjects (e.r. literature) and boys tend to choose science subjects (e.g physics) Why do you think this is so? Should this tendency be changed?

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Nowadays, some

boys

are interested in doing science

subjects

,especially physics and girls

students

are willing to do literature

subjects

. To be honest, to some extent

this

is correct and to some extent it is wrong. In ,addition if there is

this

type of tendency it will surely be changed, it will be discussed in

further

paragraphs.

First

of all, the girls' children are interested in learning things completely, while spending more time than

boys

. So that, they are taking

subjects

like Malayalam and English literature and writing them well. Most of them are not listeners and they won't be having technical

knowledge

and critical thinking ability. that's why they are more interested in these types of

subjects

On the other hand

, most of them are interested in writing poems and novels .

this

is proof of their power of imagination. In my point of ,view

this

all are the reasons for girl

students

studying literature

subjects

more than

boys

Secondly

, for

boys

, they won't be interested in sitting and studying, most of them are quick learners and they are not willing to spend more time on their studies.

in addition

, most of them are critical thinkers, and they are having some technical

knowledge

than girls. most of them are interested in physics. Physics is a subject which includes, instrumentation. In conclusion, all

students

have

knowledge

about all

subjects

. Based on our educational system,

students

won't be getting much

knowledge

in all the

subjects

, only one they prefer to study.

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In some schools and universities, girls tend to choose art subjects (e.r. literature) and boys tend to choose science subjects (e.g physics) Why do you think this is so? Should this tendency be changed?

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