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In some schools and universities, girls tend to choose art subjects (e.r. literature) and boys tend to choose science subjects (e.g physics) Why do you think this is so? Should this tendency be changed?

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Nowadays, some
boys
 are interested in doing science
subjects
 ,especially physics and girls
students
 are willing to do literature
subjects
. To be honest, to some extent
this
 is correct and to some extent it is wrong. In ,addition if there is
this
 type of tendency it will surely be changed, it will be discussed in
further
 paragraphs.
First
 of all, the girls' children are interested in learning things completely, while spending more time than
boys
. So that, they are taking
subjects
 like Malayalam and English literature and writing them well. Most of them are not listeners and they won't be having technical
knowledge
 and critical thinking ability. that's why they are more interested in these types of
subjects
 .
On the other hand
, most of them are interested in writing poems and novels .
this
 is proof of their power of imagination. In my point of ,view
this
 all are the reasons for girl
students
 studying literature
subjects
 more than
boys
.
Secondly
, for
boys
, they won't be interested in sitting and studying, most of them are quick learners and they are not willing to spend more time on their studies.
in addition
, most of them are critical thinkers, and they are having some technical
knowledge
 than girls. most of them are interested in physics. Physics is a subject which includes, instrumentation. In conclusion, all
students
 have
knowledge
 about all
subjects
. Based on our educational system,
students
 won't be getting much
knowledge
 in all the
subjects
, only one they prefer to study.
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