Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Mr John, I am writing
this
letter in response to your
complain
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complaint

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regarding the noise from my flat. The main cause for
this
is my children had a party with
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their

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thier
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their

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friends at that time we are not at home. After my investigation, I got to know that they bought
loud speakers
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loudspeakers

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and danced
whole
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the whole

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night with high volume sound. I apologize for
inconvenience
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the inconvenience

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caused. I could
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imagine

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imagne
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imagine

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how much you and your family
has
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have

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suffered due to the noise. Heartfelt empathy from me and my family. To address
this
issue, I requested my children not to repeat
this
again.
Moreover
, I have ordered
smart
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a smart

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device to measure sound
decibles
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decibels

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in my house to frequently monitor
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remotely

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remotly
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remotely

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. And
also
, Ordered
a
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apply

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new
sound proof
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soundproof

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walls to block indoor noise. Please feel free to contact me at
anytime
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any time

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!. Yours Sincerely, Rana
Submitted by rana on

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