A Museum Near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary / unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary / unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary / unpaid work. In your letter - explain why you want to do voluntary / unpaid work at the museum - describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful - give details of when you would be available for work

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to express my interest
for
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voluntary
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job at
local
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museum which was advertised on a television commercial. I am interested in
this
job as I always wanted to serve
for
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apply

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a social cause in our local community. I believe that
this
is
a
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best opportunity not only to
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fullfil
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my desire and
also
to dig deeper
about
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ancient
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history of my town. My skills and
education
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background could be
a
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apply

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best suitable for
this
job role as I pursued
bachelor's
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a bachelor's

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degree in art and gallery in 2012 from
local
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university and have five years of experience
in
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as a librarian where I have gained immense knowledge
on
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our culture, traditions and language.
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, I can apply
my
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these skills to assist local
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visitors

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vistors
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visitors

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Last
but not the least, I am available in
evenings
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as mornings I am occupied with my work and weekends. If you like my profile please schedule an interview at your earliest
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convenience

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convience
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. Thanks Raghu
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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