Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Different

species

of

animals

have been coexisting from time immemorial in different habitats,

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due to their wide

extinction

from the surface,

hence

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garden's birth.

Wildlife

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A Wildlife

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park is a place in which

animals

of different kinds are kept in an enclosure to nurture, protect and prevent their complete

extinction

. While most individuals are of the thought that

wildlife

parks are harsh,

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should be shut down, other proponents are of the view that the usefulness of the park life areas is quite significant in the sense that the wild will be protected.

This

essay will discuss both views and my opinion. On the one hand, in as much as

animals

are meant to live and multiply in the form of procreation, they need a natural habitat to function optimally.

This

is why most individuals are concerned about the closure of the menagerie which they believe

are

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small and not spacious enough to accommodate the

animals

to move freely. Take

for

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instance,

crocodile

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, which is both

aquatic

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an aquatic

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and land reptile, needs enough space to move on land and equally swim in

water

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,

however

, it is restricted to a limited area.

This

hampered freedom will

subsequently

bring about malfunctioning. The small space allocated to each animal in these zoological gardens will be one of the many reasons why the

wildlife

parks should be proscribed as suggested by some individuals.

On the other hand

, some proponents accept that park-like areas should be upheld in order for the

animals

to be preserved from

extinction

and

also

overhaul overall causing of harm or even death to dwellers nearby by some of these wild

animals

. The sole care of these

animals

will rest on the shoulders of their captors. More so, they will be well fed with high quality and with all the

supplement

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required alongside different varieties. Any of them found to be sick and weak will be attended to promptly. Even though their movement might be somewhat restricted, they will have a safe and enabling environment to live away from multiple predators.

For instance

, the lives of young antelope will be protected from the lions or hyenas, these ferocious

animals

who do not spare them from hunting and tearing them for

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. The aspect of safe keeping and proper feeding of these wilds will be adequately overseen by their keepers,

hence

, the need to allow the zoological gardens to continue. In my own opinion,

wildlife

parks

aids

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preservation. Stupendous numbers of

species

are becoming extinct across the globe and many more are increasingly threatened and

therefore

risk

extinction

. A lot of terrible things happen to truly wild

animals

that given the chance will not happen in zoos. Predators are curtailed to a larger extent,

animals

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life expectancy is increased, starvation is minimised,

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health care is rendered to the weak and sick ones.

Furthermore

,

menagerie

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also

provide

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an avenue for education and research into

life

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cycle of these

animals

and

its

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breeding rates. In conclusion, it is pertinent to consider

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benefits surrounding

wildlife

park conservation. Considering numerous ongoing universal threats to the environment, it is difficult for me to view zoos as anything but essential to the

long term

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survival of numerous

species

. The captured wilds that would have long gone into

extinction

, like several other

species

will be preserved. Moreso, research work into different

species

and love for these

animals

will grow.