Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Different
species
of animals
have been coexisting from time immemorial in different habitats, however
due to their wide Add the comma(s)
,however
extinction
from the surface, hence
zoological
garden's birth. Correct article usage
the zoological
Wildlife
park is a place in which Correct article usage
A Wildlife
animals
of different kinds are kept in an enclosure to nurture, protect and prevent their complete extinction
. While most individuals are of the thought that wildlife
parks are harsh, hence
Correct word choice
and hence
it
should be shut down, other proponents are of the view that the usefulness of the park life areas is quite significant in the sense that the wild will be protected. Correct pronoun usage
apply
This
essay will discuss both views and my opinion.
On the one hand, in as much as animals
are meant to live and multiply in the form of procreation, they need a natural habitat to function optimally. This
is why most individuals are concerned about the closure of the menagerie which they believe are
small and not spacious enough to accommodate the Correct subject-verb agreement
is
animals
to move freely. Take for
instance, Add the comma(s)
,for
crocodile
, which is both Correct article usage
the crocodile
aquatic
and land reptile, needs enough space to move on land and equally swim in Correct article usage
an aquatic
water
, Add an article
the water
however
, it is restricted to a limited area. This
hampered freedom will subsequently
bring about malfunctioning. The small space allocated to each animal in these zoological gardens will be one of the many reasons why the wildlife
parks should be proscribed as suggested by some individuals.
On the other hand
, some proponents accept that park-like areas should be upheld in order for the animals
to be preserved from extinction
and also
overhaul overall causing of harm or even death to dwellers nearby by some of these wild animals
. The sole care of these animals
will rest on the shoulders of their captors. More so, they will be well fed with high quality and with all the supplement
required alongside different varieties. Any of them found to be sick and weak will be attended to promptly. Even though their movement might be somewhat restricted, they will have a safe and enabling environment to live away from multiple predators. Fix the agreement mistake
supplements
For instance
, the lives of young antelope will be protected from the lions or hyenas, these ferocious animals
who do not spare them from hunting and tearing them for meal
. The aspect of safe keeping and proper feeding of these wilds will be adequately overseen by their keepers, Add an article
a meal
the meal
hence
, the need to allow the zoological gardens to continue.
In my own opinion, wildlife
parks aids
preservation. Stupendous numbers of Change the verb form
aid
species
are becoming extinct across the globe and many more are increasingly threatened and therefore
risk extinction
. A lot of terrible things happen to truly wild animals
that given the chance will not happen in zoos. Predators are curtailed to a larger extent, animals
life expectancy is increased, starvation is minimised, Change noun form
animals'
animal's
prompt
health care is rendered to the weak and sick ones. Correct word choice
and prompt
Furthermore
, menagerie
Correct article usage
the menagerie
also
provide
an avenue for education and research into Change the verb form
provides
life
cycle of these Add an article
the life
animals
and its
breeding rates.
In conclusion, it is pertinent to consider Correct pronoun usage
their
many
benefits surrounding Correct article usage
the many
wildlife
park conservation. Considering numerous ongoing universal threats to the environment, it is difficult for me to view zoos as anything but essential to the long term
survival of numerous Add a hyphen
long-term
species
. The captured wilds that would have long gone into extinction
, like several other species
will be preserved. Moreso, research work into different species
and love for these animals
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