In some countries, secondary school aims to provide a general education across a range of subjects. In others, children focus on a narrow range of subjects related to a particular career. Which do you think is appropriate in today’s world?

Education is the backbone of the country and

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exemplary future

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always

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on good learning. Where are some majority of the people believe general subject learning is more important and some believe a single

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study is good. I strongly support,

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in

particular

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stream

is more worthy. There are two main points, pupil

perform

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better in selected

subjects

and specialization generate higher

career

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opportunities

opportunies

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opportunities

. In

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essay, I will discuss both points in paragraphs.

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Todays

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, high school

students

are enough mature and they know their

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strengths

strength

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strengths

better than anyone. Specific subject learning, particular their knowledge or skills in one direction but

it

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helps them to learn easily.

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, a

student

is good in maths and science but he

have

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more

five

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than five

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subjects

. It is difficult for him to study all the

subjects

at the same time.

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, he

perform

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well if he

have

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only three

subjects

in which he is good. In a nutshell, specific subject learning

build

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the

student

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confidence and skills. Specialization, means you have all the knowledge and skills related to the particular

stream

. For the medical

stream

,

students

should have to choose

biology

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background

as well as

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, as well as a engineering students,

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a engineering

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an engineering student

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students

should have mathematics in their high school.

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is to say,

a

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students

who completed his

Masters

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Masters's

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in Neurology get more opportunity comparatively a plain

bachelors

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bachelor

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of

medical

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a medical

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student

. It is

crsytal

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crystal

clear,

learning

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that learning

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or

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multiple

subjects

gives average result while particular learning

filter

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your competitors. In conclusion, learning

of

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specific

subjects

makes

students

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students'

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career

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careers

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bright. Selection of

subjects

,

build

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their confidence and specialization open up

career

paths for them. For every

student

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it is necessary to explore their interest

stream

and pursue their

career

in the same.