You have learned that a financial organisation in your city gives money as a loan to students who like to take a part-time course. You are interested to do the course and have decided to take a loan. Write a letter to a local financial organisation. In your letter, • give your qualifications and work experience • give details about the course • explain how this course will help you

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to request
you
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for
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an educational loan to pursue a part-time course. To commence with, I have completed
bachelor's
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degree in Electronics & Communication. I have 8 years of experience in information technology as a software developer and served for 4 years as a faculty at Ballari University. Moving onto the course, I want to seek Artificial Intelligence as it is
a
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widely used in all recent gadgets. By end of
this
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I will be able to write python programs and design mini
robot
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with
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assistant
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, these days almost every smartphone or home assistant
devices
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like Alexa,
Google
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and Google

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home use
this
technology to assist human beings with
some
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all topics, as result, Many employers across the globe recruiting candidates with
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skills and training certificate. Please respond at your earliest convenience!. Yours Faithfully, Rana
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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