You have learned that a financial organisation in your city gives money as a loan to students who like to take a part-time course. You are interested to do the course and have decided to take a loan. Write a letter to a local financial organisation. In your letter, • give your qualifications and work experience • give details about the course • explain how this course will help you

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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an educational loan to pursue a part-time course. To commence with, I have completed
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degree in Electronics & Communication. I have 8 years of experience in information technology as a software developer and served for 4 years as a faculty at Ballari University. Moving onto the course, I want to seek Artificial Intelligence as it is
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trending and
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widely used in all recent gadgets. By end of
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I will be able to write python programs and design mini
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with
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, these days almost every smartphone or home assistant
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like Alexa,
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home use
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technology to assist human beings with
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all topics, as result, Many employers across the globe recruiting candidates with
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skills and training certificate. Please respond at your earliest convenience!. Yours Faithfully, Rana
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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