A friend of yours is thinking of going to a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter, Explain why you think your friend would enjoy camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go on camping with your friend this summer

Dear John, Hope you are doing good!. I am
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to hear that you are
finally
planning to go
for
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a camping holiday and I am glad you reached out for my advice.
To begin
with, Undoubtedly, you will have countless memories
in
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your
next
trip as I know how much you love
the
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nature.
Moreover
, far from busy life, trekking in
peacefull
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woods and walking on lake shores gives you
a
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refreshment and happiness.
Lastly
, you enjoy the delicious food cooked by local tribes and explore their cultures and arts.
However
, you should take some precautions to avoid consequences, when you walk for miles in
a
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sunny weather you might dehydrate so don't forget to carry a
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watter
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bottle and
summer
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outfit.
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. During nights to combat mosquitos and insects add
a
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insect repellent to your
bagpack
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Finally
, Unfortunately, I have
a other
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commitment for
this
weekend. I have to visit my
client
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office. If something changes, I keep you posted. I hope you will have
great
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time and fun! Yours lovingly, Rana
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