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More people are shopping online today than ever before Why do people choose to shop this way Are there any disadvantages to shopping online

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Thanks to the development of
Internet
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, there is no denying the fact that online shopping is being more popular these days.
This
 trend creates a definite amount of benefits but there are
also
 some drawbacks. On the one hand, it is generally accepted that online shopping brings about several merits. The most predominant one is that it
save
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 customers’ time. To be specific, customers do not have to commute to the markets or stores and stand in
queue
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a queue
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. Another generally admitted strength is
that
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 affordable price.
This
 means
,
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 users can compare different
prices
 to choose the suitable
to
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for
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 their budget. To illustrate, purchasing in stores always have the more expensive
prices
 because of extra
pays
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 for rent, staff, tax and store decorations. Whereas, online shopping often
offer
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 many promotions, especially holidays that can reduce
waste
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money
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of money
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. On the other side of the fence,it is apparent that there are as well many negative aspects. A major minus point worth considering here is that it is an
addicted
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 hobby. To clarify, consumers can buy everything easily because of their affordable
prices
, not for their uses. One more common disadvantage is that consumers can be cheated.
This
 derives from the fact that most
of
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customers
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the customers
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 notice the items because the price is suitable to their affordance but forget to read the feedback and comments. In conclusion, there are plus points to online shopping regarding saving money and recommended
prices
.
However
, the downside would emerge
consequently
 in terms of addiction and being cheated.
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