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Some people think that children should start primary school as soon as possible,while others believe they should start school after reaching 7 years old.To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Nowadays, there has been a widespread argument that pupils
supposed
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 to commence school right after they graduate from kindergarten, others believe that it would be excellent if they start to study before their
peer
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, the faster the better. From my perspective, I strongly disagree that
children
 start their education very early. The following essay will elucidate my stance.
First
 and foremost, educational institutions do not suitable to
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accommodate
accomodate
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accommodate
children'
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 desires
such
 as playing around rather than sitting in a class and listening to teachers.
Children
 have a bunch of energy which needs to be deployed.
As a result
, they cannot
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 with structurize schedules.
Besides
, educational curriculums require pupils to follow the rules. If
children
 have no ability to deal with
such
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, they will be overwhelmed because they are actually free
learner
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.
Secondly
,
children
 should be encouraged to regulate their emotions before starting formal education
instead
. Introducing them to emotional management is good for their mental, they will know how to deal with anger or
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disappointed
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 when their expectation does not match with
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reality. As a consequence, they have a better standard to control their relationship with others.
Secondly
, parents should
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prioritize
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prioritise
to train
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 them to share with their friends and boost their
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empathy
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emphasis
 or emotional intelligence.
For instance
, if they experience an unpredictable situation, it would prevent them from
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tantrum
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.
However
, despite those conditions, schooling after 7 years old is positive for their character development because they study with the patent system.
Furthermore
, they will
also
 obtain social skills since they interact with many friends. To conclude, regardless
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 benefit of getting into
educational
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institution
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 before 10 years old, I believe that educating them to regulate their emotions is better rather than encouraging
children
 to formally study.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • critical developmental period
  • foundational skills
  • learning difficulties
  • long-term academic outcomes
  • structured learning environments
  • emotional and social development
  • mental health
  • well-rounded development
  • natural pace of childhood development
  • cognitive and personal growth
  • mature emotionally and socially
  • structured demands
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