Some people think that children should start primary school as soon as possible,while others believe they should start school after reaching 7 years old.To what extent do you agree or disagree

Nowadays, there has been a widespread argument that pupils

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to commence school right after they graduate from kindergarten, others believe that it would be excellent if they start to study before their

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, the faster the better. From my perspective, I strongly disagree that

children

start their education very early. The following essay will elucidate my stance.

First

and foremost, educational institutions do not suitable to

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accommodate

accomodate

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accommodate

children'

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desires

such

as playing around rather than sitting in a class and listening to teachers.

Children

have a bunch of energy which needs to be deployed.

As a result

, they cannot

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with structurize schedules.

Besides

, educational curriculums require pupils to follow the rules. If

children

have no ability to deal with

such

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, they will be overwhelmed because they are actually free

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.

Secondly

,

children

should be encouraged to regulate their emotions before starting formal education

instead

. Introducing them to emotional management is good for their mental, they will know how to deal with anger or

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disappointed

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when their expectation does not match with

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reality. As a consequence, they have a better standard to control their relationship with others.

Secondly

, parents should

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prioritize

prioritze

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prioritise

to train

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them to share with their friends and boost their

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empathy

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emphasis

or emotional intelligence.

For instance

, if they experience an unpredictable situation, it would prevent them from

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tantrum

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.

However

, despite those conditions, schooling after 7 years old is positive for their character development because they study with the patent system.

Furthermore

, they will

also

obtain social skills since they interact with many friends. To conclude, regardless

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benefit of getting into

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institution

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before 10 years old, I believe that educating them to regulate their emotions is better rather than encouraging

children

to formally study.