Some people think that goverment is wasting money on arts and thag money could better spent else where to what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is widely argued that

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the goverment

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goverment

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government

spends too

much

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many

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budgets on

unnescessary

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unnecessary

parts

such

as

arts

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the arts

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. Some

people

believe that money should be well managed to more important factors for life. In my opinion,I totally disagree with

this

statment

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statement

because

arts

bring great benefits to all

human

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humans

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.

To begin

with,

arts

are

a

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apply

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fascinating subjects that inspire

people

to alter their practices.

In other words

,it

allow

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allows

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individuals to think

out

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outside

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of the

boxes

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,so new trends are eventually developed. Music,

for example

,is another form of

arts

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art

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that should be supported by the

goverment

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government

. As singers have tremendous effects on young generations,many

bahaviors

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behaviours

are imitated and transformed

to

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into

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social

value

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values

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.

Thus

,it is crucial for authorities to use

this artists

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this artist

these artists

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to promote the national campaigns.

Arts

,as the main

subjects

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,is worth enough to invest

to

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in to

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change

the

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apply

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people

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people's

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mindset.

In addition

,numerous forms of

arts

facilitate the

enjoyement

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enjoyment

of

the

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leisure activities. Paintings,as

the

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a

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popular

hobbies

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hobby

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,make

people

more focused on what they do.

As a result

,they should be more concentrated on doing routine tasks.

Moreover

,

arts

make

people

relax and relieve daily stress.

Such

arts

should be promoted by the authorities to encourage the appropriate way for relaxation.To support the art workers,it is vital to spend enough money for

operation

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the operation

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.

Accordingly

,it is not exaggerated to claim that

arts

are crucial for society in terms of mindset fulfilment. In conclusion,

although

arts

are not

vital

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a vital

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part of physical fitness,it is important for mental enrichment.

Therefore

,it should be well supported by the national authorities .