In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

Taking a

year

off is becoming

increasingly

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in

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for

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young people for working and travelling before attending the

third

level

education

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of education

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.

This

essay will suggest that experience gained and

money

saved are the biggest advantages of

this

but delaying careers and reducing motivation to study are the primary disadvantages. The main advantages of a gap

year

are learning more about the world and earning

money

.

For

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Students

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students

who have finished

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high school take a

year

to learn what life is like outside the world and how to deal with other people by working in

community

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the community

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as a volunteer or travelling to different places where can know other cultures.

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, a student who works as a volunteer or part-time in

variety

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a variety

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of place

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place

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can know the value of

money

and save up

money

before he begins his

studies

between

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taking a

year

. The result can be seen clearly in

students

who gain their

career

and what

feilds

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fields

they want to choose in university.

On the other hand

, working and travelling after the completion of secondary school leads to a

year

gap

breaks

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and breaks

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the rhythm of

studies

. Some

students

may find working more important or interesting when they start earning. Eventually, they will give less importance to their

studies

. Unfortunately,

this

hunts their

career

prospects. As an example, without having good

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academic

acedemic

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academic

qualifications, it is impossible to find a good job or build a successful

career

. The gap

year

can seriously affect the

career

prospects of

students

who lose their focus on

studies

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their studies

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. In conclusion, taking a break from

studies

can be

advantages

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if

students

earn

money

for their

career

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careers

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and learn more about the world.

However

, they should

also

be careful that it does not delay the start of their

career

and lose their mood in

studies

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their studies

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.