in their advertising,businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way.why is this?do you think it is positive or negative development?

presently, in their advertisements,companies are highlighting the fact that what they are producing is brand new in some way.I reckon that it is because of the concept behind the advertising as they are produced to catch
people
Use synonyms
's attention and pursue them to buy some goods.I think it is a negative development and in the essay, I am going to talk about its positive and negative effects of it and make a comparison between them. I think advertising is a creative way to show businesses ideas through the flashy content,it is a positive development but only to some extent which helps employees to participate and brainstorm about the new
products
Use synonyms
so it makes them enthusiastic about their job and helps them to have a new opinion and share these opinions with other colleagues,but the concept
that is
Linking Words
behind the advertising somehow remains inconsiderate as not only are they focus on the good prospects of their item for consumption but
also
Linking Words
they are overstated about the features and it is a negative development. in terms of negatives effect,
first
Linking Words
of all,advertising is a medium to represent a product to a consumer and makes them interested in that good to reach the final point and
that is
Linking Words
selling the
products
Use synonyms
so in
this
Linking Words
process associations may do anything to convince the public that the
products
Use synonyms
are the best and it provided them new amenities,while,many of
this
Linking Words
saying is not true and they are just exaggerating about their goods.
for example
Linking Words
, nowadays the majority of the population tends to be slim and they do anything to pursue
this
Linking Words
goal,so the pharmesotical communities begin to make some advertisements for
this
Linking Words
widespread issue and it gives
people
Use synonyms
some ensure that
this
Linking Words
medicine is their final solution and through
this
Linking Words
mean they will sell their
products
Use synonyms
.in my opinion it is kind od exploitation as it targets
people
Use synonyms
in their wickedness. in conclusion,
although
Linking Words
,advertising is a way of introducing new
products
Use synonyms
to
people
Use synonyms
who are in need,the companies are taking advantage of
this
Linking Words
media and sometimes lie to
people
Use synonyms
about their merchandise to gain their trust,it is not an acceptable approach.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • emphasise
  • advertising
  • products
  • innovation
  • competitive strategy
  • consumer dissatisfaction
  • value
What to do next:
Look at other essays: