You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter - say how you feel about his performance - give details of your music-related activities - explain how you would like him to help you with your music-related activities

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to appreciate your phenomenal performance at

Newcera

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concert

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Global Ground

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last

Sunday. Indeed, I have never enjoyed

such

wonderful and energetic singing from any singer.

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, one of your romantic songs ``Your charming eyes' ' stunned almost everyone with love and affection for their better half. Because I run a local

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, I have listened to your pop songs and played with my

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members at many ceremonies. Though our

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is not so big, we have 20k followers on an

instagram

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page where I teach various instruments online.

Hence

, I need a favour from you as I have recently heard that you always love to promote young talent on your page and in concert. If you post some of my

band

's videos of your songs on your social media, it will be a great help for us to get recognition in

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In addition

, since you have opened an open music studio for new performers, it will be an honour for us if you allow us to perform in it. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you in anticipation. Best regards, Harry Brown

Submitted by Mrjit147 on Sat Jun 18 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

196 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

stellar performance
captivating
musical prowess
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repertoire
collaboration
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aspiring musician
composition
rendition
inspirational
vocal range
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