Q. People who go to live in other countries, should follow the customs and traditions of the new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The
traditions
and customs of various countries are different. It is fully suitable for the climate and cultural habitats of specific areas. So people who wish to live in other countries should know much more about the
traditions
and
culture
. I support
this
statement to a large extent for some reasons, which will be discussed in
further
paragraphs.
First
of all, with the influence of the modern era, there are some changes in the tradition of the
country
. Young people don't interested in
traditions
so it has been disappearing. On the other ,hand it is visible only at marriage functions or festivals. In-depth, each
country
has its own
culture
.
For example
, if we want to go to a
country
which has a cooler climate, we should have a dress like that only
Secondly
, compulsory persons familiar with their
culture
because, if some countries don't wish to teach girl children and they are not promoted to work.
For example
, Afghanistan has a similar situation after the attack of the Taliban. They relieved all the working women from their workplace and they won't be allowed to go outside. From their point of ,
the
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view they are only wanted for sex and to take care of their children. No more duties are there for women,
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if we wish to go and live in each
country
should be familiar with their cultures and
traditions
too.
Otherwise
, it will be causing much more problems. In conclusion, based on my opinion before going to a
country
we wish we should familiar with their
traditions
and
culture
. they may have their own traditional foods and customs. It is very important to maintain our
culture
too.
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