2. You have moved to a new place. Write a letter to a friend giving reason why you moved to that place. Describe that place. Invite your friend to visit you.

#place #friend #reason #visit

Dear Smith, I am writing to you to inform you that I

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to Canada due to the fact that of my work

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situation

situaton

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situation

. I got an offer from a company which is in Toronto, Canada and

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I had to change my place, too. here in Toronto there are many

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of people who has their nationality and we can easily communicate with them, they are friendly and kind. the weather in hear is almost cold but has

such

a nice and beautiful overview

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the city. everybody

use

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bicycle and train for

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4 paragraphs

95 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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