2. You have moved to a new place. Write a letter to a friend giving reason why you moved to that place. Describe that place. Invite your friend to visit you.

Dear Smith, I am writing to you to inform you that I
traveled
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travelled

The spelling of traveled is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.

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to Canada due to the fact that of my work
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situation

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situaton
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situation

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. I got an offer from a company which is in Toronto, Canada and
therefore
I had to change my place, too. here in Toronto there are many
type
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types

The singular countable noun type follows the quantifier many, which requires a plural noun. Consider using a plural noun or a different quantifier.

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of people who has their nationality and we can easily communicate with them, they are friendly and kind. the weather in hear is almost cold but has
such
a nice and beautiful overview
in
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of

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the city. everybody
use
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uses

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bicycle and train for
transporting
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transport

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