University education system is one of the most widely discussed topics these days. Many people believe that college students should be allowed to choose subjects they like to study. Others think that it is always better to learn subjects that have relevance in the future and I agree with them. Both views will be discussed in this essay

On the one hand, there are

people

who claim that college

students

should be given the privilege of choosing

the

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subjects

of study. Usually, the

subjects

for a particular course are decided by the university. According to these

people

, doing these courses is not effective and

this

has to change. If

students

get the opportunity to choose their

subjects

, learning will become more interesting for them.

In addition

, there are

students

who have talents in many other fields.

Therefore

,

this

proposed change in the education system will allow them to enhance their knowledge in a wide variety of

subjects

and polish their talents.

For instance

, if we include some arts and cultural

subjects

in engineering courses,

this

would pave the way for them to explore other fields.

Nevertheless

,

this

will affect the focus and ruin the quality of education.

On the other hand

, some

people

believe that education should be based on the major

subjects

of the particular course rather than the student's interest. In their view, when

students

complete their course, they should have a thorough knowledge of that area.

This

is only possible if they study the

subjects

specific to the stream.

Moreover

, when we consider the future, competition for jobs will be very high and industries will hire only the finest talents.

For example

, a lot of innovations are happening. New subject topics and research fields have started to come up resulting in the betterment of technologies. Since the employment opportunities will be based on

this

technological knowledge, it is

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, highly important that university

students

should focus more on studying these

subjects

for

their

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better future. To conclude, many

people

are against studying only core

subjects

;

however

, it is always better to study these

subjects

and make their fundamentals strong for a successful future