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Band 4.5

Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter: explain why you changed your previous job describe your new job tell him/her your other news

Dear Smith, I am writing to you to inform you that I have changed my job and got an offer from a game company named Gameloft. It is located
on
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 Toronto, Canada which
why
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 I accepted to move to Canada. My previous position was not satisfied me enough regarding
to
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its salary and
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workplace
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work place
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workplace
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. My colleagues speak most of the time in their
langueges
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language
 which made me uncomfortable. I always had in mind to work in English speaking company and country. My new position has more
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benefits
benifits
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benefits
 than before
such
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 as accommodation and
help
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 you
for
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with
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residency
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the residency
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process
proccess
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. At
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last
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 I need to add I will come back to visit you in
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next
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 2 weeks, I cannot wait to see you again. Kind Regards

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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