Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter: explain why you changed your previous job describe your new job tell him/her your other news
Dear Smith,
I am writing to you to inform you that I have changed my job and got an offer from a game company named Gameloft. It is located
on
Toronto, Canada which Change preposition
in
why
I accepted to move to Canada.
My previous position was not satisfied me enough regarding Add a missing verb
is why
to
its salary and Remove the preposition
apply
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workplace
work place
.
My colleagues speak most of the time in their Correct your spelling
workplace
langueges
which made me uncomfortable.
I always had in mind to work in English speaking company and country.
My new position has more Correct your spelling
languages
language
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benefits
benifits
than before Correct your spelling
benefits
such
as accommodation and Linking Words
help
you Wrong verb form
helping
for
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with
residency
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the residency
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process
proccess
.
At Correct your spelling
process
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last
I need to add I will come back to visit you in Add a comma
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2 weeks, I cannot wait to see you again.
Kind RegardsCorrect article usage
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.