Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make. Has this been a positive or negative development.

The diagrams illustrate the mean shares in representative meals of three types of nutrition. Generally,

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in American people’s diet

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for the largest portion

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consuming

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and saturated fat, while snacks

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the leading place in added

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intakes

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. As is shown clearly in the

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two pie charts, 43% of

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is eaten through

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, while the figure for saturated fat is relatively lower, at 37%.

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, the

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intakes from lunch are 3% higher than saturated fat.

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, the

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of saturated fat which is eaten through snacks

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higher than

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. The data for breakfast is 14% and 16%

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according to

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and saturated fat respectively, which is similar to the data

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added

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. As for the added

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, the biggest contribution is snacks, accounting for 43%, while

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is the

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-largest portion. It is noticeable that the intake of added

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from lunch and

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lower than the other two categories of nutrients.