You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English-speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to the landord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like to the landlord to take

Dear Ms. Shirley, I hope
mail finds you well. Let me introduce myself. My name is May, My family rented your apartment in May 2011 as we are newcomer to Canada in Apr 2011. I contacted with your property manager, who is suggested to me that I should discuss with you about the possible solution. We are pleased to have
a nice apartment, which is closed with the largest shopping mall in Richmond with friendly neighborhood.
, we found that one of the doors of television
is unable to opened. During the the television carbinet is fixed with the wall.
, we checked with property manager, who informed us that we cannot remove the
without your approval. In the meantime, we asked the technican to find the way out.
, he told us that we need to remove
in order to install internet as there is no alternative socket in the living room for installation. Because of
, we would like to discuss with you the possible solution. We have scheduled the
installation schedule in coming two weeks. We can ask a handyman for an quotation, which can be fixed the
friday. The services fee is roughly around CAD 100. We would like to send you a bill, which can offset the
rental payment. My contact number is: 123456 with email address: Looking forward to receive your reply. Yours faithfully, XXXXX
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