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The increasing of private car lead to high level of pollution. Do you agree with this statement and what can be done to solve this problem?

#car #level #pollution
I agree with the notion that more
people
 are buying their personal
cars
 which leads to additional
vehicles
 in the streets leading to a high level of
pollution
.
This
 essay will summarize what are the solutions to
this
 problem.
Firstly
, the
government
 should implement rules and regulations to limit noise
pollution
 from the speed of
the
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cars
.
For instance
, if the institution will implement a law that the
cars
 can be used only according to the
last
 digit of the plate number.
For example
, the automobiles to be seen in the
street
 for Sunday to Tuesday
is
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 only for odd numbers and even numbers for Wednesday to Saturday.
People
 who drive
the
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vehicles
 which
is
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 not in accordance with their plate number will be penalized.
As a result
, only a few
vehicles
 can be seen in the
street
 and
pollution
 will be less.
Secondly
, a limitation on buying
cars
 should be implemented by the
government
. Nowadays,
people
 tend to buy more than 1 car for one family. There are instances the family owns two to five
cars
.
Government
 should only allow one car for each household to limit the number of
vehicles
 on the
street
.
Thirdly
, car manufacturing companies should make
less
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 smoke-belching
vehicles
.
Cars
 on the streets using diesel usually emit smoke which is detrimental to the health of the
people
. These
cars
 should not be used in the
street
. The black smoke coming from these
cars
 causes air
pollution
. In conclusion, the
government
 should find a way to implement a law to solve the problem of
pollution
 from the increasing numbers of
vehicles
 on the streets.
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