2. You have moved to a new place. Write a letter to a friend giving reason why you moved to that place. Describe that place. Invite your friend to visit you.

Dear Smith, I hope
this
letter finds you well! I would like to let know that I travelled to Canada because of my work situation. I got an offer from a great company which is in Toronto, Canada and
therefore
I had to change my place, too. My previous place in Krakow wasn't satisfied me and people did not speak English. here in Toronto there are many types of people who have their nationality and we can easily communicate with them, they are friendly and kind. the weather in hear is almost cold but has
such
a nice and beautiful overview of the city. everybody uses bicycles and trains for transport.
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