In many countries women and men are working full time. It is therefore, logical for women and men to share household works. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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this

fast-paced world,

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a full

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full time

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full-time

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job plays a vital role in everyone's life. In many

nations

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,nations

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both

men

and

women

are involved in

full time

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full-time

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work

so some individuals think it is a logical reason to share the

household

works

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work

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between

men

and

women

.In my point of view, I believe that

,

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the

work

in the house should be shared by

both

men

and

women

,

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When they are going

for

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to

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a

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work

a job

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work

.

To begin

with, the two individuals

men

and

women

,who are taking

care

of their family, are working as

a

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apply

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full time

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full-time

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employee

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employees

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to fulfil their needs.The major thing is to have

a good food

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good food

a portion of good food

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.

Furthermore

, to provide a good education and

a

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quality

heathcare

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healthcare

for their children, they need more money so

both

of them are working nearly

for

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a whole day. To illustrate, In a recent

survey

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it is mentioned that nearly 75% of the parents

both

men

and

women

are

woking

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working

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for

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their

thier

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their

needs, all over the world.

On the other hand

, in

early

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the early

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days only

men

will go

for

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to

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work

and

women

will take

care

of the house.Later

this

situation changed due to economic

condition

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conditions

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. Nowadays,

both

of them are working so it will be

hectic

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the hectic

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situation for

a

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women

a woman

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women

to handle

both

job and

household

work

in a day.By doing

this

,

women

who are taking

care

of

both

, are facing more

heath

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health

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issues.

Moreover

,most

of

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the

men

understand the situation and share the

household

work

with their

partner

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partners

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.

For example

, in

recent

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a recent

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survey

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,survey

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it is shown that

india

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India

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places the

first

place where

household

work

is shared between

both

the working professionals. To conclude,

nowadsys

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nowadays

,

both

the life partners are engaged in

work

to meet their requirements so it is better to share their

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household

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house hold

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household

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works between them.

By

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this

individuals,who take

care

of

both

are relieved from high

work

,stress and

heath

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health

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issues.