In many countries women and men are working full time. It is therefore, logical for women and men to share household works. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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fast-paced world,
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full time
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job plays a vital role in everyone's life. In many
nations
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both
men
and
women
are involved in
full time
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full-time
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work
so some individuals think it is a logical reason to share the
household
works
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work
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between
men
and
women
.In my point of view, I believe that
,
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the
work
in the house should be shared by
both
men
and
women
,
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When they are going
for
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to
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a
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work
a job
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work
.
To begin
with, the two individuals
men
and
women
,who are taking
care
of their family, are working as
a
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full time
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full-time
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employee
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employees
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to fulfil their needs.The major thing is to have
a good food
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a portion of good food
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.
Furthermore
, to provide a good education and
a
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quality
heathcare
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healthcare
for their children, they need more money so
both
of them are working nearly
for
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a whole day. To illustrate, In a recent
survey
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it is mentioned that nearly 75% of the parents
both
men
and
women
are
woking
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working
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for
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their
thier
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their
needs, all over the world.
On the other hand
, in
early
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the early
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days only
men
will go
for
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work
and
women
will take
care
of the house.Later
this
situation changed due to economic
condition
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conditions
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. Nowadays,
both
of them are working so it will be
hectic
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the hectic
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situation for
a
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women
a woman
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women
to handle
both
job and
household
work
in a day.By doing
this
,
women
who are taking
care
of
both
, are facing more
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health
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issues.
Moreover
,most
of
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the
men
understand the situation and share the
household
work
with their
partner
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partners
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.
For example
, in
recent
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survey
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it is shown that
india
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places the
first
place where
household
work
is shared between
both
the working professionals. To conclude,
nowadsys
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nowadays
,
both
the life partners are engaged in
work
to meet their requirements so it is better to share their
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household
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house hold
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household
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works between them.
By
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this
individuals,who take
care
of
both
are relieved from high
work
,stress and
heath
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health
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issues.
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