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10. People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it are more likely to have a satisfying working life than those who change jobs frequently. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is evidently true that people have to work anywhere to live and earn food themselves. Some of them achieve their goal by pursuing their
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 and joining their desired place. On the other ,side some of them quit jobs and search for a new destination again and again. I believe that we should not leave jobs frequently for getting
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. I will give the reasons in favour of my statement in the forthcoming paragraphs. It's the most important thing for all human beings to set the goal of
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 to succeed. Those who can do
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, which leads them to a better job market. Getting the desired work in
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 is really a matter of joy which gives mental satisfaction. If anyone works in the same station for a long time it gives him acceptability to the authority and it spread out his name and fame.
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, he is dedicated to his duty because he like his work and he joined here by his own choice. So he can serve the organization from the core of his heart.
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, the company provide
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 a handsome salary, bonus and an extra incentive for his loyalty and accountability.
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, people who change their job frequently can not get any priority from their management. They
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, it will take huge time to set up mentally in a new position with the new environment, new boss and colleagues. So they can not prove their potential to their authority.
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, nowadays, some more technological person changes their job for a high amount of scale, but eventually the deprived. In conclusion, we can come to a turning point, a permanent working mentality gives financial solvency as well as a social status but a temporary one cannot ensure that. So everyone should keep patience and do the same thing for a long time.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • career path
  • job satisfaction
  • professional goals
  • climb the career ladder
  • develop expertise
  • long-term commitment
  • financial security
  • varied experiences
  • prevent monotony
  • job security
  • career progression
  • personal preferences
  • industry dynamics
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