You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is no doubt that improving
environment
is Correct article usage
the environment
a
main aim for every individual on the earth. Environmental problems should be solved by Change the article
the
government
, companies and all people around.
Correct article usage
the government
First
of all
I honestly disagree with Add a comma
,all
this
statement, simply because natur
improvement is the duty of all society members Correct your spelling
natural
no
expectations. Change preposition
with no
Environment
has-been
improved by Correct your spelling
has been
Add an article
an individual
the individual
individual
from past years. Companies and Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
government
organizations have their own role in keeping nature improvement as the first
Correct your spelling
interest
interst
in daily routine. Correct your spelling
interest
For
example
Add a comma
,example
government
encourage all organization members to help improving
natural environmental growth.
Wrong verb form
improve
On the other
hand
some people disagree with that .as if the individual was weak and can not improve Add a comma
,hand
environment
in a real way. Persons who argued that are talking from their experience . In Add an article
the environment
conclusion
I think in my own mind that improving Add a comma
,conclusion
environment
is the responsibility of all the society members from younger children to all famous organizations and Correct article usage
the environment
government
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite