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Today I'm sharing my full essay for the question below. Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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 that tertiary education students should choose their fields without any obligation and according to their passion. While some
people
 think that it would be better for students to be forced into certain key subject areas, I believe that the former opinion is more likely to be approachable. It is true that some
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 convicted
people
 choose
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 lifestyle
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 would be beneficial for society. While some
people
 argue that they are the best ones to talk to youngsters about the dangers of criminal life and discourage them from breaking the law, I believe there are many other alternatives. It is believed that elderly
people
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the lifestyle of the current generation. Simply because of
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 of these thoughts with the needs of younger
people
, I totally agree that
such
 opinions are less likely to help youngers prepare for
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modern life. Nowadays, it is inevitable that there is a tendency for
people
 to watch overseas movies
instead
 of domestic ones. There could be several reasons which lead to
this
, and I believe that the authorities should take some measures to contribute towards the improvement of the local films. It is considered by some that the
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 of accidents
occurred
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 could be decreased by
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sever
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 punishments. While
,
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 some
people
 argue that other steps should be taken by
government
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 to tackle
this
 issue, I believe that it is better to combine all these methods. It is common these days that a growing number of men are more likely to take the childcare responsibilities, while more women than ever are the breadwinners in their families. There could be several reasons for
this
, and I deem it a very positive trend.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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