There are differing views about how we take
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diseases. In my point
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, it is equally important to spend money on prevention methods other than
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and treatment
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could be high.
On the one hand, I believe that it is inevitable to invest in acquiring knowledge of the diseases from
experiments and clinic practice. If the doctors could stay abreast of more information
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the virus and
of diseases, they have the tendency to make well-informed decisions about the medicine
and treatment.
may lead to a more efficient
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,
,investment in
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methods
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indispensable to address
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, the number of sick people
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likely to decline if
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effective preventative measures have been done.
could ease the burden on the medical systems, which enables the government to have more disposable money to spend on the other sectors
as education,
transport and so on.
,
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. Without suffering from a disease, people could have more time
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society.
, it could have a beneficial impact on
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social progress.
In conclusion, I adamantly argue that it is both critical to
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and even though the money spent on
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and treatment is significant.