Prevention is better than cure’. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree.

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diseases. In my point

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, it is equally important to spend money on prevention methods other than

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and treatment

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could be high. On the one hand, I believe that it is inevitable to invest in acquiring knowledge of the diseases from

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experiments and clinic practice. If the doctors could stay abreast of more information

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the virus and

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of diseases, they have the tendency to make well-informed decisions about the medicine

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and treatment.

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.

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methods

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indispensable to address

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issue.

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effective preventative measures have been done.

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could ease the burden on the medical systems, which enables the government to have more disposable money to spend on the other sectors

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as education,

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public

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transport and so on.

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individuals

indiviuals

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individuals

are likely to lead a happier life with a healthier

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. Without suffering from a disease, people could have more time

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life and become

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society.

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social progress. In conclusion, I adamantly argue that it is both critical to

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and even though the money spent on

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and treatment is significant.