A friend of yours is thinking of going to a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter, Explain why you think your friend would enjoy camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go on camping with your friend this summer

Dear Raman, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I'm very joyful to get the news that you're planning to go on a camping holiday for the
first
time
this
summer.
Firstly
,
this
would be a great experience for you as you can explore a new place in a unique way.
This
camp will help you to relax and enjoy the mesmerizing beauty over there.
Moreover
, It will be a stress-buster trip for you.
Although
it is a good plan yet you need to think about some possible disadvantages. I am a little bit worried that you'll feel some difficulty because of your injury in your right leg as you have to travel through mountains, it might worsen your pain. I'm very happy for you and I
also
want to join the trip but due to my official commitments, I'm unable to come and enjoy it with you. I want you to have fun and discover new places over there. Pay regards to your family from my side. Regards, Kuljeet Kaur.
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