Some people think that in school discipline should be the job of teacher whereas some believe it is the parent's accountability. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

There is no denying that the
teacher
is the one who directs a
child
's future
endeavors
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. Fewer individuals believe that in school
discipline
should be the
teacher
's job whereas some believe it is the parent's accountability. I wholeheartedly believe that
this
trend should be changed.
Firstly
, many support the view that children must be disciplined by the
teacher
when they are in school as teachers duty. As an example
teacher
must be superior to the
child
in academic knowledge and spiritual life. The
teacher
must develop trustability, respectively and be obedient in the
child
's heart. By way of example, the
teacher
should be a good example for the
child
to follow.
Furthermore
, the
teacher
should be closer to the
child
-like mother with kindness, love, and care which will result in trustability and an obedient in
child
attitude.
Moreover
, the
teacher
is paid by the parents or the government hense the
teacher
has the duty to build up the
child
's affective domain while focusing on the cognitive domain and psychomotor domain.
Hence
, the
teacher
is the right person who must take
responsibility
for building
discipline
in children's attitudes.
Besides
that, the parent has
responsibility
for developing attitudes and morals in the kid's life because the kid spends only five hours with teachers but the rest of the day they spend with their parents. Since parents are strucked with their jobs they do not have time to spend with their kids, so they always pass their
responsibility
to the
teacher
. Most of the children come from broken families and bad family backgrounds which will result in naughty attitudes and bad morals to them.
Such
kind of
child
will break the classroom
discipline
. Family culture is the mirror of a
child
's
discipline
. As educational psychology says more than 75% of the
child
morals and ethics are built by their family. Thereby, family members have a major role to develop
child
discipline
by involving a youngster in spiritual activities and teaching them to respect adults, which will build courtesy in the
child
's attitude. To sum up, taking everything into consideration, building
child
discipline
is a
teacher
's duty as it is paid job, but the parent has more
responsibility
than the
teacher
to build a disciplined
child
.
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