You had applied to City College recently, now the college has written back saying the course you applied for is full and they have even suggested an alternative course. Write back to them stating:- - Why did you choose the first course? - Your views on the suggested second course - Your plan of action

Dear Sir, With due respect, I am writing
this
letter to put forward my concern about the alternative
course
of
B
.E. IT that you have suggested in your reply to me. At the onset, since
B
.Tech IT professionals are in high demand on an international level, I chose
this
course
so it could have increased my professional opportunities in the future.
However
, as you mentioned that the seats are full in
this
course
, I do not think the alternative
course
of
B
.E. can be suitable for me. Because I have checked international education evaluation websites,
this
new
course
is yet to be listed on these.
Therefore
, I request you to put my name
in
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the waiting list
of
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B
.Tech IT. If any student shifts from the
course
, please consider my name on
the
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priority basis. Because the suggested
course
is not fulfilling my international job requirement, I am not able to select
this
course
. Thank you for suggesting an alternative
course
to me. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Harry Brown
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