Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to the regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
According to some, there are benefits for industries and companies to move to suburbs. In my opinion, the advantages definitely outweigh the disadvantages.
There are possible drawbacks for businesses of moving outside cities,
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move and possible infrastructure loss. Moving large manufacturing anywhere is a huge charge itself, and if we count possible logistic risks we will see the price rise. If we consider a factory which takes needed materials from the city, Linking Words
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, the waste recycling plant which takes waste from the city, we observe that logistic cost increases depending on how far it will be located. Another example is a clothes factory which takes fabrics from the textile production nearby. Linking Words
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changes require not only additional drivers but possibly trucks and logistic managers.
Despite the minor disadvantages above, from the long-term perspective, the advantages definitely outweigh, some examples are pollution production, mitigation of water contamination and subsequent litigations which can cause huge budget deprivation. Linking Words
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, if we take a waste recycling plant from the example above and imagine that something went wrong and a plant has suddenly started to contaminate surrounding water pumps which Linking Words
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an event may go into bankruptcy and the owner will possibly get to prison. So risk mitigation is the most important and the profit of moving companies far from urban areas makes huge sense.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite