You have bought a new camera but when you got it home you found it had some problems. You returned the camera and spoke to the company representative a week ago but the camera has still not been repaired. Write a letter to the company. In your letter Introduce Yourself Explain the situation Say what action you would like the company to take

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with a

camera

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I bought in your store,

last

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week. As a photographer

student

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I have planned for months to

acquiring

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this

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and I was extremally sad when I brought the

camera

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to my home and noticed the autofocus function was not working properly. When I spoke to the company representative

last

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week I told him exactly what was happening. I can turn the

camera

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on, it is capturing some beautiful things from a far distance, but when I try to focus on something really close, the cameras are not readjusting inside it.

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I have read the manuals and

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watched some youtube videos, I noticed it was not the desired behaviour.

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, I came back to the store and I was told they would repair the device in a couple of days.

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, it is been more than a week and I still have no estimated date to receive my

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, I need the

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to be fixed because I use it in order to study. I would like to receive a new

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or have the same one working as

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new

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. I look forward to hearing from you

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

203 words

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