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In some countries, young people like to live on their own or live with their friends after finishing school. Some think it is a good idea. Do you agree or disagree?

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It has been known that in some countries, youngsters prefer to live independently surrounded by their friends after graduation, and
that is
 thought to be a wonderful thing. I completely agree with
this
 choice for the importance of independence, growth development and maintaining self-confidence. These three backbones complement each other which leads people
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adolescence to a higher level of self-sufficiency.
To begin
 with,
children
 need to live with their friends to build up a sense of strength and have the habit of doing their tasks without the urge to ask for help from parents or relatives.
Also
, living with a companion teaches people several lessons like being cooperative in cleaning the house, cooking and washing the dishes.
In addition
, responsibility is another vital factor in everyone’s life and by living with someone; you construct the attitude of being responsible,
for instance
; when renting an apartment and have in mind the date of your rent payment so automatically, you must pay for the bill.
Moreover
, when
children
 graduated from school, they do like to be free and implement that by moving to a different home or sharing an apartment with a close friend. That proves these
children
 improving and developing self-maturity through moving forward into a better life by being in control of their personal life. BBC News showed in a report published recently that
children
 who live with their friends can achieve a higher level of education in a short period of time. In conclusion, it is extremely important for kids to live with a friend rather than living with their parents after finishing school. I strongly agree with
this
 idea because it helps in the
children
's development, and growth and establishes a strong discipline to reach the significant stage of education.
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