Many criminal commits further crimes as soon as they are released from the prison. What do you think causes of this ? What effect this have on the society ?

It is not unusual for

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criminal

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to break laws again when they just come out of prison. I think there are several factors

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attributed

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attributed

to

this

and the government could act more to mitigate

this

problem.

Firstly

, most

of

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the criminal does not have the latest skills that enterprises or private sectors are looking for or

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some companies that just do not want to employ people with a criminal record.

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could lead to

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high proportion of

umployment

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unemployment

employment

among them.

Consequently

, they have the tendency to commit crimes again.

Secondly

, the social life of the criminal is likely to be distorted

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the long time away from their families and friends, who tend to have a distant relationship with them after they are released.

This

will have a negative impact on their sense of belonging to

society

.

Finally

,

as a result

, the crime rate will increase which will impose a strain on the security of

society

and obstruct social

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progress

progess

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progress

. Considering the reasons mentioned above, I think that the government could pay more attention to

this

and act on it.

To begin

with, community service is a better option for those who did not commit a severe crime. By contributing to

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, it could help them

reintergrate

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reintegrate

into

society

and might

also

create a sense of achievement. At the same time, more vocational training could be introduced into the jail to

dissemniate

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disseminate

the newest knowledge and educate the inmates to keep up to date with the

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latest

lastes

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latest

skills, which could help them to be a

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productive

produtive

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productive

member

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of

society

.

Therefore

, an increase in the employment of the criminal who finished their sentence could have a positive impact on

society

. To sum up, I would argue that it is still possible for the government to address

this

problem

although

many

criminal

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is likely to

reoffend

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re-offend

again after being released.