Towns and cities should be divided into zones so that all the schools are in one area, all the shopping malls are located together and all the industrial sites are situated close to each other. To what extent do you agree that urban areas should be split into distinct zones?

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Municipalities and downtowns should be isolated into regions so that all the study places are together and shopping centres are transferred to one range

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, complete industries locations are established near to each other. I agree with the statement that the urban sector should be divided into different sections, In the following ,paragraphs will discuss all the views of the essay.

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the health of people by shifting factories to a separate location of the town because the gasses emitted from the industries directly affect the social health. Nowadays, pollution is a global issue around the world and every nation working on it to reduce

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problem by locating industries far away from the population area.

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, carbon

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is an extremely dangerous gas for the environment which

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affects the lungs of the human body.

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, parents always search for the best institute for their children so if all education centres

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in a particular field it helps them to select a better option for pupils and it helps students by sharing their knowledge with each other

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their skills.

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, many people spend a lot of time purchasing things from different places, so, if all the shopping malls are located in one place it will help them

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items from one region of the city,

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, they can save their crucial time.

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, traffic jams are a common problem in all markets of the town, so to overcome

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issue people waste their time without any consequences, which is a big loss for society.

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, a separate location for a shopping centre with a parking area is a better option for urban territory.

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, governments should take

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to prepare

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between education places, shopping markets and industrial areas of the towns

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cities which

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the local public in many aspects like, they will be kept away from numerous types of pollution and they become more healthy.

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Address all parts of the task question with a clear position stated and supported throughout the essay.

coherence and cohesion

Organize information and ideas logically, with clear progression throughout.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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