Write a letter to your friend about missing the date with him on a day because you have planned. Tell him how you tried to contact him but it did not work out either. In your letter, you should tell: what the reason is how you tried to contact him give an alternative plan to meet him sometime.

Dear Justin, I am writing
this
letter to let you know that I am really sorry for missing the date which we planned to travel
in
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Bangkok, Thailand. Before that day, I had a car accident and my right leg is
broke
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Atfer
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I woke up and
have
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tried to reach you. Unfortunately, my phone was
broke
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and my doctor said that I have to stay in the hospital for two weeks. To heal and do
a
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physical therapy
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immidiately
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Moreover
, he said that my case will spend about two months
for
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recovery
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. To redeem a mistake I accidentally made, I will never miss our
next
plan and I will do everything you want. I hope you understand Lots of love Patricia
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