You are a student at a university in the UK. you have recently lost your University ID card. Write a letter to the local Police station. In your letter, -Who are you? -What happened -Ask to record your details so that you can apply for a new ID card.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to tell my ordeal about an incident at Saint Willson Bus Stand where I lost my university

card

last

Sunday. I am Jacob, a student of

Harrison

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the Harrison

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University of London with Student registration

number P12556. I was

traveling

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travelling

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to Cera Hills college for my seminar and during the transit, Inadvertently my

card

slipped from my upper pocket which I checked twice prior to the bus stop. Because

this

area falls under the jurisdiction of your police station, kindly

this

letter

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treated as a

first

information report.

In addition

, in order to record my personal details, photocopies of my passport, address proof,

date

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and date

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of birth proof along with a copy of my lost

card

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are

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attached herewith

this

letter. I request you kindly process my details and issue me a police verification certificate which is a requirement to apply for a new university

card

. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Harry Brown.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

168 words

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