Nowadays people tend to change a few careers during their life. What are the reasons for this, in your opinion? Do you think it is good for the society as a whole?

In the modern era, a plethora of job
opportunity
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for students as well as young humankind, but only in some sectors
such
as Electrical and Computer. In the present day, few folks
change
their
stream
. I will discuss what is the reason behind
this
and how it is good for the community.
To begin
with, in the 21st century most the products are connected with
the
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Science and Technology.
For example
, mobile phones, smart watches, electrical vehicles and so on.
However
, the student who is interested in labour works or perhaps any
work
which
are
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not related to science. Which cause, they cannot build their future in these sectors.
As a result
, they have to leave that field and
change
the
stream
. Apart from
this
, nowadays the electrical segment or maybe IT Sector is providing good employment ship with a high salary package.
Therefore
, enormous pupils
change
their
stream
and
work
with other companies which are not related to their field. On other hand,
this
is good for society because every student has a dream
for
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making more money and becoming a wealthy person. For
an
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instant, young people have to
change
their
stream
. If they cannot see a better future in
this
field.
Although
, a number of the community choose
different
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domain and works with that particular company. which cause, the people who
change
their
stream
, that can make cash and start a new happy life without any bother. To conclude, I suppose, according to different fields, the company provide a good salary.
Therefore
, the humankind who does not satisfy with their job
work
must
change
their domain and
work
in different sectors where they get more money and satisfaction.
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