These days many countries help other countries by giving free food, medical and other aid. what are the drawbacks and benefits to give and receive country?

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that nowadays a large number of nations assist other regions by imparting free food, medical, technology and so on. While giving or receiving help has numerous advantages but its disadvantages can not be undermined.
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essay will articulate both pros and cons in the upcoming paragraphs. To commence with the advantages
first
is that
this
practice helps in making strong
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with each other. To elaborate
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, when
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country
helps to recipient
country
by providing whether food or medical facilities
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and
then
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builds better rapport with each other.
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assisting
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impoverished nations brings
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of security
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country
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.
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creates harmony and peacefulness at the global level.
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conducted by
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the Indian

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government in 2015 revealed that those
countries
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underprivileged nations, and
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promote good relationships.
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giving and receiving help from each other has mutually beneficial. Apart from
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movement
also
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international trade because those
countries
which get aid frequently
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goods of theses from these
countries
.
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this
practice not only
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relationships but
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international trade. Moving towards disadvantages that receiving helps make the underprivileged
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lazy and
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dependence
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. To explain it, when one
country
assist
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the other
country
, and so these
countries
do not make efforts to overcome their problems by
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countries
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are needed to help by getting employment them
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low pay
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citizens protest against their own government if they feel that their
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hard earned
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tax money
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being provided to others.
Therefore
, the trend of giving and receiving support creates resentment not only locally but
also
globally. In conclusion,
although
providing and getting assistance has some demerits but its merits can not be ignored which not only make strong relationships but
also
brings security sense.
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