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The government should invest more money in teaching science than in other subjects for the country's development and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is believed that the administration should spend a large sum of money on
science
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 tutoring compared to other conventional lessons for the advancement of a
country
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 and a subsequent progression. I completely disagree with the statement because of two rock-solid reasons.
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 of all, a
country
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’s
development
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 does not solely depend on the people who are from a scientific background. Even though they can contribute a lot to the infrastructural
development
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, say, developing high-rise buildings, bridges, and so on but they can not do anything for the business aspects of a
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 which is
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 a key area for
development
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. In
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 case, we need people from business schools,
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, BBA and MBA degrees holder. That’s why the government should give priority not only to the
science
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 lesson but
also
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 the business lesson in order to develop a progressive nation.
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, a
country
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 should
also
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 consider cultural advancement when it comes to the question of
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.
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 to say, an authority should invest more money in
subjects
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 that are related to the arts,
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, dance, music, and many more in order to make a more culturally superior nation. For
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 reason, all cultural
subjects
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 should be samely treated like a
science
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. In a nutshell, the government should equally treat both the
subjects
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 from the
science
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 and the art background when it comes to the question of investment. To sum up, it must be said that for the
development
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 of a
country
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 and to continue its progression the government should equally give priority to other
subjects
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 along with
science
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. I guess without doing
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, a
country
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 can not be advanced.
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