In many countries more and more young people are leaving school but unable to find jobs. What problems do you think youth unemployment causes for individuals and the society? What measures should be taken to reduce the level of unemployment among youngsters ?

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There is a complication in a particular amount of countries related to jobless among youngsters who left the
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problem. Youth unemployment has
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triggers and misunderstandings that trace their origins
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to elementary
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of elementary priorities by parents.
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completed education,in order to be properly trained for making a decision about their profession and be ready to deal with it may cause a number of unpleasant consequences,
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of frivolity and arrogance.
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school
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means that teenagers are very susceptible to influence from outside, usually not guided by facts and arguments but more by preference or majority. In comparison, individuals and governments might make a difference in
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laborious situation. One solution is parental guidance for the youth. Parents should encourage their children to finish
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help in reducing teenage unemployment by opening more jobs for them.
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, local units should provide young people with proper vacancies not only during summer breaks
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but throughout the year.
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could not only help in increasing their motivation,but
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to decide what they want to do in the future during
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working time. To conclude,unemployment among
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minors could be a challenge that could affect
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performance. Strategies, both by parents and
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are worth
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to help eliminate
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,the goal is to help individuals and the nation to overcome
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widespread dilemma.
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