Some people participate in extra‐curricular activities such as volunteering in charitable events or joining dance groups to gain more knowledge and experience. Others simply focus on their goals such as academic studies or work. Which do you think helps in improving a person’s knowledge and experience and why?

IN SPITE OF HAVING ADVANTAGES OF BOTH INSTITUTIONAL AND
NONACADENIC
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NONACADEMIC
NON-ACADEMIC
LEARNING PROCESS,
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IT IS
POTANTIAL
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POTENTIAL
FOR PUPILS TO ACHIEVE KNOWLEDGE FROM ACADEMIC COURSE. SOME PEOPLE ARGUE THAT
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ONLY ACADEMIC EDUCATION CAN REACH THE STUDENTS TO THEIR GOALS, EXTRA CURRICULAR
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DO
THIS
. IT IS A
SUCH
TOPIC WHERE I
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BETWEEN A ROCK AND A HARD PLACE,
AFTERALL
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AFTER ALL
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I OPINE THAT YOUNGSTERS SHOULD BE QUALIFIED FOR
FUTURE
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THE FUTURE
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BY RECEIVING PROPER LESSONS FROM EDUCATIONAL INSTITUTES. THE SPAN OF
LIFE
IS TOO SHORT, HERE AS WE CAN ENGAGE
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OF ACTIVITIES TO BE HAPPY.
FIRST
OF ALL, EVERYONE HAVE TO BE COMPETENT TO DO SIGNIFICANT TASK BY GATHERING PEDAGOGICAL CAPACITY. AND IT OBVIOUSLY
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OCCURRED
OCCURED
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OCCURRED
BY INSTITUTES NOT ANY CHARITY ORGANIZATIONS. SINCE NO ONE CAN PLAY
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ROLE
FOR
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SOCIETY BY BEING
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MANKIND OR
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OTHER RECREATIONAL PERFORMANCES.
FOR INSTANCE
, WE OBSERVED MOST OF THE CELEBRITIES BECOME SUCCESSFUL IN
LIFE
BY GATTING EXPERIENCES FROM ANY DEFINITE SYLLABUS. WE CAN
MANTION
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THE NAME OF DR MUHAMMAD YOUNUS, THE
FIRST
NOBLE
LARIATE
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LAUREATE
LARIAT
VARIATE
FROM BANGLADESH. IN EARLY HE EQUIPT WITH RESOURCES AND
THEN
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FOR MANKIND.
FURTHERMORE
, THOSE WHO
INVOLVED
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IN EXTRA-CURRICULAR PROGRAMS IN THE
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EARLY
EARLLY
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EARLY
STAGE OF
LIFE
,
THEY
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CAN GATHER PLENTY OF EXPERIENCE BUT THOSE WILL NOT
SUSTAINABLE
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.
FOR
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LONG RUN THEY WILL SUFFER MUCH FOR THEIR STUPIDITY. WHEN THEY HAVE BEING IN SPORTS
MOODE
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MOODIE
, WHEREAS OTHERS WARE IN CAMPUS, WHICH MAKE THEM ENOUGH CONFIDENT AS WELL AS CREATIVE . THEY RUN FOR TEMPORARY SUCCESSES.
FOR EXAMPLE
, MOST OF OUR ACTORS AND FILM BOSSES HAVE BEEN GAINING SEVERAL THINGS, BUT THEY ARE SUFFERING FROM
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COMPLEX. IN CONCLUSION, IN RAIN AND SHINE EVERYONE SHOULD BE DREAMED TO BE SUCCESS IN
LIFE
. IT IS
UNDOUBETELY
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UNDOUBTEDLY
PROVED THAT STUDENTS PRIME PRIORITY TO EARN BASICS FROM SCHOOLS AND
THEN
DO OTHER ACTIVITIES.
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  • personal growth
  • well-rounded
  • teamwork
  • time management
  • empathy
  • social awareness
  • specialization
  • expertise
  • measurable
  • academic achievements
  • passion
  • career paths
  • synergy
  • creative problem-solving
  • community service
  • real-world challenges
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