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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

#food #drink #products #levels #sugar #health #people
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condition
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 always have a direct link with our diet. The common notion, 'we are what we eat and drink' is gaining importance in the contemporary epoch as people are tempted to follow unhealthy eating patterns thereby endangering their
well being
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. Owing to the ill effects of
sweetners
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sweeteners
 on
health
, there is an argument supporting that ought to increase the cost of sugary products in order to discourage
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 consumption by
public
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. I certainly agree with the aforementioned
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health
 as
health
 is the prime important factor. According to the trends in
economy
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, the demand for a product decreases with
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 of its price.
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, money is
top
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 priority of people, they tend to think twice before buying an expensive good with high sugar content
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 switch their minds to opt for cheaper as well as healthier alternatives. To illustrate
this
, the sales of
Coca cola
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 plummeted
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 almost 30 % as soon as its price went up by 5%.
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,
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 cost of sugary commodities will have
negative
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a negative
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 impact on
purchasing
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 power of individuals. Being juveniles and teenagers as the major customers of sweetened food and drinks, making it expensive ultimately reduces
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 consumption as the money in hands of children
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 limited somehow forcing them to restrict the intake of these
unheathier
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unhealthier
healthier
 diet options.
For instance
, if
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the price
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 of Cadbury has been increased
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up to
upto
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up to
 a considerable level its buying frequency will be reduced automatically. To sum up, taking
health
 and customer's rights into consideration, I reckon that increasing the cost of goods with artificial
sweetners
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sweeteners
 is beneficial in reducing
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 consumption.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • health problems
  • manufactured food and drink products
  • sugary products
  • excessive sugar consumption
  • discourage
  • promote
  • healthier choices
  • reduce
  • increased taxes
  • fund
  • health education
  • prevention programs
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