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Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is a common belief that
museums
 should be enjoyable
places
 to entertain
people
. While others think that the purpose of
museums
 is to educate. In
this
 essay, I will elaborate on both sides and
then
 state my position. On the
first
 hand, the reason
people
 state that
museums
 are entertaining
places
 is that many recreation activities inside the
museums
 will attract more visitors to come and learn about the local
history
.
This
 means many
Competition
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Competitions
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 with many alluring prizes will encourage
people
 and bring them to learn.
Beside
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Besides
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 that, some documentary movies about historical events are not only entertaining it
also
 help
people
 easy to get access to knowledge with passive learning. Had it not been for many events to bring more participants to the
museums
 and that support the government widen the gallery scale. On the
second
 hand, others hold the view that a historical gallery is a place where visitors explore the
history
 of the nation.
In addition
, it is very possible for those who really care and want to learn deeply in an academic way.
In particular
, it
also
 depends on the reverence of what they
exhibit
. A good example of it is the Museumisit which is the Museum of Vietnamese
History
. Inside
History
 of it has an
exhibit
 of a mummy
exhibit
 a mummy of a woman and
that is
 the reason why the
museums
 do not allow the use of cameras and keep silent during the visiting process. As a consequence, because of the reverence of traditions inside the hall, hall that they do not accept many recreational activities. To conclude, many
people
 think opinions that historical galleries should be enjoyable
places
 for a place to
people
, while others support the view the purpose of
museums
 is told to educate. In my opinion, an opinion that it has many great
places
 for entertaining, not entertaining not necessarily
museums
 necessarily is
museums
 and I agree that the
exhibit
 that
exhibit
 is a purpose for educating.
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