The scientist believes that computers will become more intelligent than human beings. Some people find it is a positive while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both points and give your own opinion

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some

people

state that wild

animals

are useless in the 21 century and trying to ensure them a proper environment is a waste of money.

However

, there are various ways in which wild

animals

can be used nowadays and most of them involve

entertainment

purposes,

such

circuses

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.

Besides

, each wild animal is different so each calls for special needs that can be extremely costly for the

entertainment

areas. As far as I am concerned,

people

should be aware that, in order to benefit from wild

animals

in shows, they must provide

them

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facilities

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that will make them feel in their natural habitat.

This

essay will discuss the importance of awareness regarding wild

animals

and why

people

should preserve their rights and create

them

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a proper habitat.

Firstly

, in the

21 century

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people

became more and more interested in

circuses

because they involve wild

animals

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animal

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shows.

This

way,

people

have the opportunity to observe

animals

' features and

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interact

interract

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interact

with them.

Moreover

, if a show involves camels or zebras,

people

will be looking forward to

ride

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them and

to take

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taking

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a great

amount

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of pictures. Clearly, it is a profitable area of

entertainment

due to the increasing interest in

this

kind of

shows

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.

However

, the organizers of

circuses

have to preserve wild

animals

and

to

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set boundaries for the participants, because

animals

' behaviour can be unexpected.

For example

, research shows that a big percentage of accidents in

circuses

took place because of the closeness between the participants and wild

animals

.

Secondly

, in order to continue to benefit from wild

animals

' presence,

people

are compelled to ensure them a proper habitat, similar to their natural one. Clearly,

people

must take care of

animals

'

wellbeing

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well-being

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,

otherwise

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they will become depressed.

Besides

, providing them

the

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flora they used to live in will make them feel in their natural environment.

Moreover

, each

animals

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animal

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have special needs, so the employees must take into consideration a wide range of food for everybody.

For example

, according to a study, wild

animals

tend to make no difference between their natural environment and the one organized for them by the

circuses

, as long as it

is involves

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all the elements a wild animal requires. In summary, in the

21

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century

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people

find a diversity of uses for wild

animals

, but most of them prefer to admire their beauty in

circuses

. Still, even though it is a profitable way of

entertainment

,

people

have to raise

the

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awareness about

animals

' rights and

to

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ensure them a proper way of living, even though it might be extremely expensive.