Some people belive that the most fitness and strongest person and team can achive great success in sport, other belive that sucess depends on mental attitude.

Sports is a field where
fitness
and toughness are necessary for every
player
,on the other ,hand mental
fitness
is
also
compulsory for tekal with opposite
team
or
player
. I strongly
belive
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believe
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that for sports
team
or players both things are necessary to get
desired
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the desired
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goal.
To begin
with, physical strength and good stamina is a beggest weapon of a
sportman
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sportsman
.
also
a high amount of energy
required
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is required
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for a stand long time in the
game
. If any
player
gets exhausted in-
gameth
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games
game
, it will affect all
team
members and it leads to
demotivate
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the
team
member
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and
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also
, effect the winning ability.
Furthermore
, height and muscles which indicate the
fitness
of a
sportman
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sportsman
sportsmen
shows
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show
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that a person can play the
game
in any situation or condition.
Also
, their
fitness
helps them to bounce back from any crucial condition and get
desired
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the desired
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goal.
Likewise
, mental
fitness
is
also
that much important for
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a sportsperson
the sportsperson
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sportsperson
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. Because it will change the scenario of
game
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the game
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.
For example
in wrestling if
competitor
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a competitor
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player
shows their mental level to another playeathlete he/she confidently
lose
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loses
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the match but if they do not a
player
will never come out
that
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with that
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expression on their face how much pain they have and because of that level of toughness another
player
sometimes demotivate and other one get the chance and win the
game
. In conclusion,
the
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apply
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physical shape and strength
is
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are
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necessary but the appropriate mindset will increase the chance of
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apply
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the
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them
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winning the
game
.So, physical
fitness
and mental toughness are required to
becoming
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become
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a good
player
or good
player
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