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In recent years, sports stars have become increasingly famous and wealthy. For some this is a benefit, raising the profile of sports, but for others it is a negative influence. Discuss both views and give your own view.

#years #sports #stars #benefit #profile #influence
People are more conversant about their
behaviors
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 now which
make
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 them
to
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be of God. It is a vast responsibility to take care of our parents likely our loved ones. I love an old
building
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, I am fond of history. Nowadays, it is commonly opined that punishment introduced in the early years of life is pertinent for youngsters to distinguish between good and bad. I completely agree with
this
 notion and would expatiate on the need for corporal punishment both at home and in schools.  
To begin
, the early years are the formative stages of life
hence
, habits and behaviours, beneficial or destructive, are easily imbibed by children.
This
 implies that they are not able to draw the line between what is acceptable or not.
However
, to understand
this
 distinction, certain disciplinary measures are required.
For instance
, a pre-schooler who is spanked for playing with his food will learn that
that
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it is wrong and deter from
such
.
Likewise
, if praised for arranging his toys after play, he will certainly inculcate the habit of doing so.
Therefore
, the chastisement of children is important to ensure that they learn good morals.
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