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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might be the case? Do you think this is positive or negative situation?

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There is no doubt that owning a
house
 is a goal for most
of
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the
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people
 worldwide,
however
, buying a
house
 is highly expensive. Others believe that renting a
house
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 unit is better for multiple reasons.
This
 essay will highlight the reasons
of
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people
 who prefer to own a home rather than
renting
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 one
,
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 and discuss the positives and negatives
for
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 both choices.
Undoubtely
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Undoubtedly
, the advantages of having an owned home outweigh the disadvantages,
this
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because it gives
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homeowners
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home owners
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homeowners
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 a sense of autonomy and
independency
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independence
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.
In addition
, families who are living in a
house
 they bought are capable to connect with neighbours, since they live in the same zone for a long time.
However
, buying a housing unit is expensive and not everyone can afford to handle its cost.
On the other hand
, renting method can be a better decision for some families, especially those who are not settled to live in a specific city. Nowadays,
people
 are exploring
there
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 career future in other areas and
willing
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 to relocate to find better jobs,
thus
 rent is the right choice.
However
, by renting a
house
, the possibility of ending
contract
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 with landlords is significantly high,
this
 will put the households
in
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 risk of being homeless.
Moreover
, rent annual costs may fluctuate and prices are not stable. In conclusion,
although
 renting a
house
 can offer some flexibility for small families that are not financially free or they did not decide where to work and live.
However
, owning a
house
 gives
people
 the freedom of choice to pick one that fits
with
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their needs, and provides them
a
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stable
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lifestyle
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life style
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 where they can connect with their area’s communities.
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