The responsibility of bringing up children should be shared equally between mother and father. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people argue that the responsibility of bringing up

children

should be split between

father

and

mother

, even though most people think it is all upon their

mother

. I completely agree with

this

opinion as both the

father

and the

mother

must take care of their

children

since they are the people who gave birth to them.

Firstly

, I strongly believe that in the fast-paced world we are living in, it is impossible for the woman to do the chores while looking after the toddler, so the need of the

father

in helping to bring up the

child

is crucial.

For example

, while the

mother

is working, the

father

can take care of the

child

, teaching or feeding him.

Furthermore

, the

father

can share responsibility with the

mother

by taking them to school, taking them to the park, etc.

As a result

, the

children

feel more connected to their parents which is a good thing.

Secondly

, it can

also

be beneficial to the kid. As statistics show, a kid

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up in a family with both their

father

and

mother

can perform better in school than other

children

who don’t have one of their parents or they broke up.

Although

kids often refer to their mom when they have emotional problems, they often rely on their dad when deciding or need a serious talk.

Therefore

, each parent has a perceptible role in raising their

child

. To conclude, it is very important for a

child

to receive

the

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both of their parents. Most families should try to give their

child

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the best care possible so that the

child

could develop well.