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Nowadays, more people are choosing to socialise online rather than face to face. Is this a positive or negative development?

#people #socialise #face #development
In
this
 modern milieu,
the
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most individuals are opting for communicating online with their relatives, friends and family members rather than person to person. In my opinion, I believe that
this
 is a negative development.
Firstly
,
this
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with
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 people can bring negative elements into a person’s life.
Secondly
, it will discuss the negative impact of
social
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the social
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network
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networks
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. Currently, a great number of people are utilizing the internet for different
intention
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intentions
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,
such
 as
,
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 playing online games, communicating online,
learning
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and learning
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 new languages
however
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, the most commercial one is
that
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socializing online. Obviously, it decreased
face to
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face
 communication skills over the past decade. A prime example here is that you cannot sense the emotion or enthusiasm
from
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 the other person during socializing online and
thus
, you will
face
 mental illness due to too
many
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 online socializing and
as a result
, your interpersonal communication skills will decline.
On the other hand
, the new socially active era causes laziness and reduces family closeness. One example can be that
instead
 of running to your friends you can message them or
instead
 of walking upstairs to notify
for
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them for
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 family dinner you can blog it. Social networking makes people’s life so convenient that it creates
the
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laziness.
Furthermore
, people who
socializing
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socialise
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 online too much are forgetting to communicate with their family
member
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members
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 even if
next
 to them. In conclusion, it is good to communicate online with your family members, friends and relatives if you are away from home
however
, there is nothing better than communicating
face
 to
face
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social media platforms
  • online interactions
  • virtual communication
  • global community
  • interpersonal skills
  • digital divide
  • cyberspace
  • virtual presence
  • social networking
  • mental wellbeing
  • digital literacy
  • safe spaces
  • marginalized groups
  • face-to-face communication
  • socialisation
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