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Some people think that competitive sports have a positive effect on the education of teenagers while others argue that the effect is negative. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Over the
last
 two or three decades,
sports
 are being fascinated by
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young people. It is commonly believed that competition in
sports
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 several advantages
on
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 the studies while others think that those are being
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affected
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effected
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 adversely.
However
, in my point of view, students must have to participate in
sports
 and
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in
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further
. To commence with,
sport
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 competitions play a vital role in student lives because it builds skills
such
 as self-confidence and team spirit. Admittedly, there is a feeling of competitiveness that cause stress
however
,
this
 is not limited to the field of athletics. Actually, competitions are there in every aspect of life
such
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 sector.
Hence
, competitive
sports
 teach us
problem solving
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 skills, how to overcome challenges and hurdles, accept failures, sportiveness and keep trying to
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succeed
suceed
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succeed
.
Moreover
, sport is a popular career option for many
younsters
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youngsters
. Through the state and national level sporting competitions,
best
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of
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talent can be identified. These young adults could move on to the international level and bring name and fame to the country.
On the other hand
, proponents of the view that the youth should not
permitted
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 to
participation
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 in
the
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athletics because they would feel stress and strain.
In addition
 to
this
, pressures of winning are too demanding for the
laureats
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laureates
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 and led to
deterious
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deleterious
serious
 consequences. Sometimes,
win-at-all costs
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to
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serious actions
for instance
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 not able to accept failures,
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 drugs for better performance. In conclusion, children and young people should be permitted in the sport competitive activities
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as a result
 they can able to achieve enormous development in studies and life.
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