Some people think that competitive sports have a positive effect on the education of teenagers while others argue that the effect is negative. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Over the
last
two or three decades, Linking Words
sports
are being fascinated by Use synonyms
the
young people. It is commonly believed that competition in Correct article usage
apply
sports
Use synonyms
posses
several advantages Wrong verb form
possesses
on
the studies while others think that those are being Change preposition
in
Correct your spelling
affected
effected
adversely. Correct your spelling
affected
However
, in my point of view, students must have to participate in Linking Words
sports
and Use synonyms
discussed
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discuss
in
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it
further
.
To commence with, Linking Words
sport
competitions play a vital role in student lives because it builds skills Change the noun form
sports
such
as self-confidence and team spirit. Admittedly, there is a feeling of competitiveness that cause stress Linking Words
however
, Linking Words
this
is not limited to the field of athletics. Actually, competitions are there in every aspect of life Linking Words
such
as an example of school life to Linking Words
employee
sector. Correct article usage
the employee
Hence
, competitive Linking Words
sports
teach us Use synonyms
problem solving
skills, how to overcome challenges and hurdles, accept failures, sportiveness and keep trying to Add a hyphen
problem-solving
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succeed
suceed
. Correct your spelling
succeed
Moreover
, sport is a popular career option for many Linking Words
younsters
. Through the state and national level sporting competitions, Correct your spelling
youngsters
best
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the best
of
talent can be identified. These young adults could move on to the international level and bring name and fame to the country.
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apply
On the other hand
, proponents of the view that the youth should not Linking Words
permitted
to Change the verb form
be permitted
participation
in Replace the word
participate
the
athletics because they would feel stress and strain. Correct article usage
apply
In addition
to Linking Words
this
, pressures of winning are too demanding for the Linking Words
laureats
and led to Correct your spelling
laureates
laureate
deterious
consequences. Sometimes, Correct your spelling
deleterious
serious
win-at-all costs
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win-at-all-costs
to
serious actions Change preposition
apply
for instance
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is
not able to accept failures, Correct subject-verb agreement
are
taking
drugs for better performance.
In conclusion, children and young people should be permitted in the sport competitive activitiesCorrect word choice
and taking
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, as a result,
as a result
they can able to achieve enormous development in studies and life.Linking Words
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