Some people think that competitive sports have a positive effect on the education of teenagers while others argue that the effect is negative. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Over the

last

two or three decades,

sports

are being fascinated by

the

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young people. It is commonly believed that competition in

sports

posses

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several advantages

on

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the studies while others think that those are being

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affected

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effected

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adversely.

However

, in my point of view, students must have to participate in

sports

and

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in

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further

. To commence with,

sport

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competitions play a vital role in student lives because it builds skills

such

as self-confidence and team spirit. Admittedly, there is a feeling of competitiveness that cause stress

however

,

this

is not limited to the field of athletics. Actually, competitions are there in every aspect of life

such

as an example of school life to

employee

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sector.

Hence

, competitive

sports

teach us

problem solving

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skills, how to overcome challenges and hurdles, accept failures, sportiveness and keep trying to

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succeed

suceed

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succeed

.

Moreover

, sport is a popular career option for many

younsters

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youngsters

. Through the state and national level sporting competitions,

best

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of

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talent can be identified. These young adults could move on to the international level and bring name and fame to the country.

On the other hand

, proponents of the view that the youth should not

permitted

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to

participation

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in

the

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athletics because they would feel stress and strain.

In addition

to

this

, pressures of winning are too demanding for the

laureats

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laureates

laureate

and led to

deterious

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deleterious

serious

consequences. Sometimes,

win-at-all costs

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to

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serious actions

for instance

is

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not able to accept failures,

taking

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drugs for better performance. In conclusion, children and young people should be permitted in the sport competitive activities

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as a result

they can able to achieve enormous development in studies and life.